Wednesday, 4 November 2009

Ringing Sound

I've been calling you everyday for the last 3 months.
You've left me on hold for too long now.
I'm just leaving a voice-mail; the reason i rang in the first place, isn't valid now.
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4 comments:

  1. Alfie Ordinary8 November 2009 at 20:07

    you're new work has a different feel to it

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  2. Danny-K9 November 2009 at 16:42

    in what way??

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  3. Alfie Ordinary10 November 2009 at 11:18

    well for a start they are different to look at. just the general shape and structure.

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  4. Danny-K10 November 2009 at 23:21

    I realised the shorter ones were quite effective. also ive been doing alot of short writing in a book so it's mainly from them.

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